For today’s prompt, which can be found here, I decided to once again not go too literal, but more literal than yesterday. My mind is on my middle grade fairy story lately so I reworked a scene from it. Tommie the fairy’s assignment is to cheer up a depressed troll (with Levi’s help). When trolls get upset, things often get destroyed. Hope you enjoy. Nox is my favorite character of all time.
Tommie and Levi followed the trail of blackened and destroyed trees looking for the fairy’s assignment. They heard her before they saw her. The troll made the most horrid sound. It was a loud, piercing screech. Tommie felt like her ears were going to burst as she got nearer. She stopped and translocated ear plugs for them both.
“Stay hidden until I get her to stop.” Levi crouched down behind a bush as Tommie walked up behind the troll. She sent a spurt of magic into the most recently burned tree and repaired it. “Hey, troll, why are you harming the forest?”
The troll spun around, startled. “Who are you?”
Tommie gasped. The troll was beautiful. Since trolls were always ugly, she was shocked. “Wow, you’re really pretty,” she blurted. “I’ve never seen a pretty troll before.”
The troll’s face went from surprised to sad and she started screeching again.
“Stop that!” Tommie yelled. “Your cry is absolutely awful, you’re going to pop my eardrums.”
The troll stopped crying and sniffled. “Do you really think so?”
“Yes it’s the worst I’ve ever heard.”
The other girl smiled. “Thank you.”
Tommie signaled for Levi to come out.
The troll watched him approach with narrowed eyes. “Do you think I’m pretty boy?”
Levi nodded. “But your breath is truly horrid. Please don’t face me when you talk.”
The troll blushed with evident pleasure.
“So why you’re destroying trees and scaring the wildlife away?” Tommie asked.
“Wait, I scared the animals?” At Tommie’s nod the troll pumped her fist in the air. “I didn’t mean to scare them but it helps that I did. I don’t really want to hurt the forest but I’m so sad.”
“It’s how you reacted when you saw me. The only thing you noticed was my beauty. You weren’t even scared.”
“Why is that be a problem?”
“Because I’m a troll. Trolls aren’t pretty, we are scary, mean, and evil tempered. Everything and everyone flees from us. Except, not from me. I don’t scare most people. The others of my kind think I’m hideous and I’m tired of not being a good troll.”
“Not a good troll? Nonsense. I’ve never heard a troll with a worse cry!” Tommie exclaimed.
Levi shook his head. “And if someone is trapped by your beauty, then they can’t escape your breath. You’re the perfect troll. You’re like a stealth troll, a ninja.”
The troll’s mouth dropped open. “I’ve never thought of it like that before. One time I tried to scare some water nymphs. No one ever told me they can’t resist beauty. I couldn’t get them to leave me alone until I ran away from the river. It never occurred to me to lure them over to scare them. I’ll have to think more about this.” She grabbed Levi’s hand and shook it. “I’m Nox.”
Tommie and Levi introduced themselves.
“Why are you here anyway?”
As Tommie explained her assignment she went back to fixing the trees. She knew it could get her in trouble but she couldn’t bear to see them in such a sorry state. When she finished the job she sat down next to the troll. Levi was describing how he and Tommie had met.
“I asked the council to let me be a fairy godmother but they turned me down. I got them to agree to let me help Tommie though,” the boy explained.
“Why won’t they let you be a fairy godmother? What right to they have to tell you what you can and can’t do?” The troll’s expression was indignant. “I’ve decided we’re all friends now. There is someone you need to meet who can help us figure this out.” She stood and walked away.
Levi turned to Tommie. “Um?”
“Just follow her, she’s claimed us as friends and you never want to tell a troll no. Let’s go.”
Tommie was very curious. If Nox could help Levi become a godmother it was worth trying.
Your character is alone in the woods and finds blighted trees, drooping plants…rot and slime everywhere. It once was beautiful but overnight is turning into a swamp–its not natural. Your character must get to the bottom of this and stop it before something they love very much is threatened also.
It’s funny but every day I read the prompt and think I’ll never come up with anything. Then after a few minutes of overthinking I calm down and ideas pop in my head. I’ve even managed to write two extra flash fiction pieces in the last few days. If you are a writer and not already doing this challenge I strongly advise you to give it a try. It’s worth it!
Below is a colored pencil sketch my daughter did of Nox.
Rough draft 662 words.